Tuesday, November 01, 2011

First Paragraph, Teaser Tuesday -- falling together


Every Tuesday, Diane at Bibliophile by the Sea posts the first paragraph of her current read. Anyone can join in. Go to Diane's website for the image and share the first paragraph of the current book you are reading.
The new book by Marisa de los Santos came in for me and I'm so happy, even though I have very little time to read. She's one of my favorite authors and has written Love Walked In and Belong to Me. This new one is called falling together. Three college friends parted way six years before but are called back together for a college reunion, and, as the book explains "But instead of a happy reconciliation, what awaits is a collision of past and present"
Here's the first paragraph:
Pen would not use the word summoned when she told Jamie about the e-mail later that night. Additionally, she would not say that the e-mail dropped like a bowling ball into the pit of her stomach, and at the same time fell over her like a shining wave, sending arcs of sea spray up to flash in the sun, even though that is precisely how it felt.

I know what you're thinking: that's a lot of analogies in one paragraph, but I'm going to defend her because I think she is just trying to show the wash of emotion that the main character Pen is feeling.

Also this week is Teaser Tuesdays.

Teaser Tuesdays is a weekly bookish meme, hosted by MizB of Should Be Reading. Anyone can play along! Just do the following:

Grab your current read
Open to a random page
Share two (2) “teaser” sentences from somewhere on that page
BE CAREFUL NOT TO INCLUDE SPOILERS! (make sure that what you share doesn’t give too much away! You don’t want to ruin the book for others!)
Share the title & author, too, so that other TT participants can add the book to their TBR Lists if they like your teasers!

"Augusta was born. I got busy, and also" -- Pen gave a nervous laugh -- "I was on the verge of becoming a stalker. I wanted my daughter to have a mother with a little more dignity than that."


I'm on page 42, and so far, I really enjoy her writing.
What do you think from these little snippets?

10 comments:

Laurel-Rain Snow said...

I want to read this one. I loved this author's first book...and this one is on my list.

Thanks for sharing.

Here's MY TT POST and
MY WEBSITE

Linda said...

I've never heard of her. I'm into a mystery kick for the most part so may not read her book.

Anonymous said...

I haven't heard of this until now. Good teaser.
My Teaser

Claire said...

Great teaser! The first line is great too :)

Thanks for stopping by Project to be Read :)

Harvee said...

It's a book I'd read, from the snippets you printed.

(Diane) Bibliophile By the Sea said...

Oh wow...that really does grab me. I need to read this one soon. Enjoy

Stephanie said...

Ooh. I love this author too, and I am #3 on the reserve list at the library. Can't wait!

JoAnn said...

My daughter loves her books, so I would keep reading... despite the analogies :-)

Tiffany Drew said...

Doesn't the cover alone make you want to read this? I love a good cover that sucks you in before you even know what it's about. It's really cute. I have a copy of this, looking to finally get to it soon!

Thanks for stopping by Book Cover Justice!

Melissa Wiebe said...

Nice teasers. Here is myFirst chapter, first paragraph; my TT is the same as this.

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